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 On Sunday, I got an email containing the copy-edits of Unjust Cause from Wizard Tower Press.

I'm not very far along yet, but I have stetted a number of things that are a matter narrative voice and/or of personal choice. I mean, the copy editor had crossed out "pennies" and written in "loose change." There's actually no need to change what I wrote, and mine is more specific, so... back to pennies, it is. I can see why, in that particular moment, the copy editor might have felt that loose change was more accurate since the earlier scene involves a number of coins that are not pennies. I don't care. I like the sound of the phrase "a rain of pennies" more than "a rain of loose change" and I am the author, so I get final say.

But, I mean, if that's my biggest complaint? It's so much better than the time that one of Penguin's copy editors didn't seem to understand what "Spidey Sense" was. 

Anyone who reads my journal regularly, however, knows how much I, in particular, need a copy editor. So, I might complain, but gods bless anyone who catches all my typos and fixes my overuse of commas.

I'm not sure if I talked about this here yet, but I also have had a conversation with the artist who will be designing my cover. I had to provide something called "an artist's brief" which I have never had to do before in my life, so I just made it into a chatty discussion of what the book is about with images of South Dakota and the kinds of stone eagles that buildings in the US have (since I wasn't sure if my artist was from the UK or not, since my publisher is... )  So, I'm looking forward to seeing that. I will say that I'm probably less picky about my covers than I am about copy edits since I have had some TERRIBLE covers in the past from Penguin.

No one should ever forget noodle appendage lady on the cover of Honeymoon of the Dead.

So, that's what I'll be working on today, I imagine. 

Otherwise, I don't know. I've been feeling kind of low-energy/borderline sad the last few days and I think it's just my body realizing that spring is coming... but isn't quite here yet.  I'm not sure. We are thinking of painting the kitchen finally, so that's a fun project to look forward to... like I said, part of it is a kind of underlying feeling of restlessness to get STARTED on spring things, while knowing I simply have to wait at least until the snow is gone.
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I've been letting pictures do the talking lately partly because my life has not been terribly exciting at the moment. Mason is off school for "summer" (though he goes "year round," which means, while he gets three months off, they're not all in the summer. We only have the month of August off before he starts third grade in September.) We kicked off vacation by going up to our friends' cabin, and now we're settling into days spent at the library.

Mason has really been taking advantage of the library this year. From some friends at school, he'd heard the Roseville Library had the "good prizes" for "Bookawocky," the libraries' promotion to encourage kids to read 20 hours. We'd been meaning to go check it out for months, but we finally made it there early last week. We registered ourselves in their system (since they're officially Ramsey County and our card is only good for St. Paul,) and got ourselves a "Bookawocky" form. Mason dilligently set out to read for 20 hours. It took him three days.

He won a day pass to the Waterpark of America, a ticket to the State Fair, a free book, and a lovely, red water bottle.

During "Bookawocky" madness, we must have also checked out over 20 books, though he's a fast enough reader that he supplimented with some books of his own. He checked out a whole bunch of chapter book sized ones, particularly the Beast Quest series and Bionicles. And, he discovered the joys of putting books on HOLD. He's now become a HOLD expert --and kind of a hoarder. I think the thrill of "request it!" went straight to his head.

Even now that "Bookawocky" is over for him (the rest of you have until the 21st!), he's been starting the day asking when we can go to the library. Routinely, we've driven between both the Roseville one and our own Mirrim Park Branch. Still, it's been fun.

We also went to the Children's Museum on Monday, as it is one of the few museums open on Mondays. Consequentally, it was really quiet at 9:00 am, and Mason nearly had the run of the place. Also, kudos to the kid for checking out the "Passport to Play" from the library, so our trip was free.

I think, however, that Mason might be starting to outgrow the Children's Museum. It's really keyed for kids much younger and I noticed that places that used to entrance him, like the faux restaurant/grocery store just don't hold his interest as long. We still love the Art Park's sandbox, and managed to spend the majority of our time there building sandcastles in the sun.

Luckily, there's still the zoo...

Otherwise, I found some time to finish up Tate's copyedited manuscript for ALMOST EVERYTHING the third Ana book, and I had a very painless experience with the copyeditor. In fact, I probably got the best copy-edit everywhere when s/he informed me that the proper usage of "nom" is "nom nom nom."

Awesome.

Otherwise, I've been kind of low-energy emotionally, and I'm not sure why. Sorting LEGOs on the floor with Mason today helped some. Though I'm still distressed how many minifigs we have that are missing their legs!

Also, I have to confess that we have not been to kuk sool wan in some time because, *cough*, we've been staying home to watch "Master Chef" on Monday and Tuesdays. Probably my mood will lift when we're back on a regular schedule with them... I feel kind of puffy and out of shape. As far as "Master Chef" goes, I'm beginning to be irritated by what clearly seem to be ratings choices. The villian was spared elimination last night, I think unfairly, because he makes a good villian. I'm also really worried that they're going to go with the perky blonde simply because she makes good cover copy for the cookbook. Jaded, I know.
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I went through my comments/replies to the copy editor and made SURE they weren't snarky. These days at my publisher the comments are all using Word's track changes features and are electronic. They used to come in paper, and were far easier, IMHO, to just shrug off and make corrections or not. But with the ease of a click I can fire back a pretty snarky comeback.

I held back. Where I couldn't, I allowed myself a rant and then made sure to change it to a simple "stet" or "OK" on my next pass through. Oh... but it was difficult to restrain myself on a couple of points. I understand people get bad matches, these things happen, but I actually had to respond regarding my use of "Spidey Sense". S/he asked: "I don't understand the referrence. Why is 'Spidey' capitalized?"

Erm, in reference to proper noun, "Spider-Man". (Note, I TOTALLY RESISTED adding "D'uh!!!!")

Which, frankly, I think was pretty damn big of me.

Because, you know, there were a couple of things where I realized that maybe my language could stand clarity, even if it meant sacrificing voice. As [livejournal.com profile] naomikritzer pointed out yesterday when I ranted a bit about this at the coffee shop, "there are people who would be fine without a copy editor, but you, Lyda, are not one of them."

So true.

My dyslexia prevents me from noticing a lot of my atrocious misspellings, not to mention the fact that sometimes, I just plain misuse words. I have my moments of malapropism. And my gasp of English grammer is often, shall we say, quirky at best. I am inordinately fond of the comma and the paraenthtical phrase. I drop verbs and nouns when I'm writing fast, too. So, really, it's no joke. I NEED a copy editor.

I'm a funny sort of writer that way, I think. I'm nobody's grammar snob, yet there are parts of the English language that make me giddy. I get wound up about the plural of octopus. (Yes, "octopi" is in many dictonaries under "usage" heading, but octupuses is most correct, dang it! Really, listen to it. It actually sounds better.) But most of the time I never use "lay" and/or "lie" correctly. I couldn't tell you for certain if English has a pluperferct verb form, though I suspect we do. Yet I never forget to capitalize English, and my resume has accents on both "e"s and tells you that I majored in history and English. It is known in some local writing circles that I once nearly got in a fist fight (and lost a friendship) over, yes, verbs.

Most of that stuff, however, I leave to the experts, like the copy editor.

I *will* fight passionately over the things like characters and plots and politics. Anyone who has sat next to me on a media panel knows that I take Star Wars, Captain America, and Battlestar Galatica so seriously I may seem a bit deranged at times. Because in the end, I consider those things an extension of my job, my vocation, my calling. Other writers wrote those things and, thus, I feel perfectly comfortable critiquing them with colleagate passion and righteousness.

Anyway, I need to go stuff folders at Mason's school right now, and get ready to take up the good fight at Wyrdsmiths tonight.

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